this story deserves a lot more reviews.
really nicely written story, realistic and sweet. ;)

i'm not sure what made me decide to read this, as ur summary is less than optimal, but i guess my psychic vibes were working lol. quite a charming story, and for once i have zero complaints. the relationship felt very real and i admire how you treated the work issue with homosexuality and how people might respond to it. and i can totally see hoe jared could fall head over heels for wick.

I LOVE THIS.

It is quite literally one of the most most enjoyable slash stories I've read on Fictionpress, and trust me when I say I've read many. Just look at the numbers on my favourite lists. You've managed to create a wonderful story without the overly forced angst and with very subtle mentions of physical intimacy. The minimal description of physical intimacy somehow made the story so much sexier, but still, I'm disappointed there wasn't a fully written make out session.:)

I'm so glad to have come upon this when it has already been completed. I cannot imagine having the patience to wait THREE years for a story. Anyhow, wonderful story and keep writing. I'm going to peruse more of your writings.

Aw! I loved the story! Its been awhile since i found a good slash story, I was starting to think i read them all.

Oh God, this is such a brilliantly done story!

I really enjoyed reading this story. It took me a couple chapters to keep track of all the characters, but once I did it was very interesting. Thanks for sharing it, and finishing it. Unfortunately, I think the story got buried in Fictionpress. For a good story of this length there should be a lot more reviews. Hopefully more people will see it and add it their favorites or C2 communities.

all the names confused me at first, but I'm starting to figure it out now. :)

:) I', now interested, but I'm tired so I shall read later!good so far!

You finished it and I love love love it! I was so excited to see you had updated and it took me a bit to finish it all...but it was so worth the wait. I hope that you do continue to write one shoters...because my love for these two has not changed one bit. Bravo my dear bravo! How the heck are you BTW?? Lord it's been ages. Hope all is well. Much love...Donna/Stormy!

I really enjoyed this story. The office interplay between all was amusing to read and made me glad I didn't have to work in the office. Wick is a great character (love his name), and a great type to draw out Jared from his little closeted world. It was really sad to know his history, and his father was a bitter **. It bugged me that the sister didn't know of this stuff earlier, but then again, just added to thet story's suspense.

I liked Stephen, as well. That cocky sh@@ was fun to read, and it was a little confusing in the beginning when it was revealed what he does and when. I truly thought he was a good guy until he all confesses. And Tracy was a good character as well. I liked her little mindgames until she turned good LOL I'd rather she was still a spiteful little b##@h until the very end, but she turned out all right. Everything was awesome until Noelle came around. It looks like it's been awhile since this was updated, so...I guess I just wanted to let you know what a good story this was. I haven't ventured into your profile yet, but I hope to find more works from you.

This is quite possibly one of my favorite stories on FictionPress. It was actually the first Slash story I've ever read and I must say that I've been quite addicted to them since. I don't normally review stories, but I noticed that you only had as many reviews as chapers and figured the story could use some attention. :)

I love how you're managing to keep this sweet without being too sweet. It's very mature in comparison to a lot of the stuff around FictionPress. Which is a good thing of course.

=) Mandraco.

This story deserves more recognition than it's getting! I just read through all 26 chapter and I can't wait for more. I love the way you write Jared and Wick's relationship, it feels very real. I also really like Tracy for some reason, can't tell if that was your intention or not, but it's all good. :D Keep up the excellent writing.

It's been days and I've finally read it all. Your story's great and I hate it when a wonderful story is underappreciated. Well, I hate it when anything is underappreciated.

=) Mandraco.