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| Nelania 2005-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseHey, I said I would review your poems/stories and I'm finally getting around to it. First off, everyone feels this way. Or if you're unlucky like me, you feel this way a lot more often. But, at least I can usually find something to think positivly about. In life there will always be people who don't understand you, some of those people you come to love even though they have such a fault. If they are truly worth loving they will stick around and at least try to learn who you are. (such mushy stuff, lol) |
| she's not breathing 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abusesince it's poetry, you get reviewed by this account. don't ask. it's a weird thing i do. wow. vocab. it hurts. *groans* ... stupid uni-people. but good word choice, in any case. haha. and if you wrote this a while back, i'm not sure how you regard it now. i like the feel of it. the length, the way you covered whole areas instead of sticking to just one theme. the formatting i didn't like, but that's personal grudge. or something. the bitterness i read here, the desperation - i love reading stuff with that in it. don't know if i really felt it all. but that was probably the formatting. i have a vendetta with formatting. yes i do. hm. alright. i'm moving on to your other poem now. ~k8 |