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Seera 2006-10-01 ch 30,	More!
HajariSheep 2006-08-21 ch 30,	More. Write more. :D I am sad about Riker, he is my favourite character :(
Too lazy 2005-08-13 ch 29,	ARE YOU HAVING PROBLEMS WITH PEOPLE STEALING? grin Keel dem. shiver Man that's a creepy machine. pets Scott and Jerry both I'm worried for Scott and poor Jerry putting up with that game... Can't wait for more! bounces ~Sparkle
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-08-10 ch 28,	"Un uneasy feeling settled over Xahvin as he deposited Riker on one of the pads" ~~An uneasy I like Vian. Creepy creepy, that strange feeling. Something get into lockjaw territory? Poor Riker. loves him dearly Incanted is a strange word. I didn't find it in the dictionary but I assume it means tilted or something. learns new things pictures Xahvin without his cloak and grins Now I am curious about Pacified and what that entails! rolls about Can't wait to see more! wiggles and settles down to wait ~Sparkle
Me Still 2005-08-05 ch 26,	PS: Rippington is also my favorite. Rippington, Shayin, and Riker. laughs herself silly at the thought of Rippington backhanding Scott without even meaning to do so Well that's a great foot to start off on... ... grins Huzzah for dominant female... purr rolls about happily I love hearing about Scott's inner workings. I'm glad that Rippington poked about trying to figure him out. And I really, really want to see the Emperor drawn. pleads sighs and stares happily for a bit I think I'm going to go get myself to bed and ponder this chapter for a bit before I read the next one. There's... a lot here to think about and fit into my head. I'm loving the story though, and I'm looking forward to reading more!! Plus the nano story you're starting THIS year, as well... wiggles So awesome, to see you putting this all the 'paper'. So, so awesome. Keep it up, talk to you soon! ~Sparkle
NOT SIGNED IN OMG 2005-08-05 ch 25,	Okay, far too lazy to sign in, BUT! m Riker pets him happily He is my favorite along with Shayin. Also... man. Things seem a bit tense between all of them. I have a feeling something is passing between Riker and Scott that no one else is really getting a grasp on at the moment. Maybe never will. "The residents would probably eat us before talk to us.” The Invader’s tone" ~~the sentence Terik's speaking here sounds a bit strange. Like there's a bit missing. Poor Terik, getting irritable at being all cramped into a tunnel and caves system. I imagine he's going to end up missing the open skies a lot more before the end of this. pets him It's strange, how Scott seems to be irritated at Terik's behavior. I mean, not strange bad but... hm... curious. Like he's thinking and feeling things but he's watching himself thinking and feeling things and lets it alone instead of acting on his emotions. I like it. The paragraph where Jerry and Scott start walking is a little jumbled. Rushed, almost. Also- "Jerry glanced over his shoulder to see two tire-looking Guards" ~~Tire-looking? ... grins at the image of lockjaw tires purrs at the thought of so many lockjaws lounging and being lockjaws in the caverns like that... m eyes glaze over OMG Jerry just gained a frillion more cool points for taking off to talk to the female locks. A frillion, I tell you. What an insane child- i love him. whines and worries about Scott and goes to read the next chapter ~Sparkle
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-07-23 ch 24,	The entirety of North Cliff sounds hauntingly beautiful. You should draw some more of it, yanno? I know you love drawing rocks!
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-07-23 ch 23,	worryworry I'm in the middle of reading and I'm very, very worried for dear Jerry... I'm surprised, actually, that they didn't pick up anydiseases really, earlier. At least not that I can remember... ;.; poor scott. poor scott seeing his father so suddenly... That had to be a slap in the face when he wasn't expecting it...
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-07-23 ch 22,	Okay, that is beyond awesome. I need a room like that! jealously wants to know lockjaws I laughed really hard when Jerry hugged Riker. HAHAHA omg, it was such a great image! And then the prying off afterwards... Good times For some reason I'm really glad that Jerry didn't just sit around and watch movies. Really glad. Because he's right- it's NOT as fun just sitting watching them by yourself. I'm also a bit worried for the possessed technology in his room...
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-07-23 ch 21,	m lockjaws all trussed up in formal wear... dreams Hahaha I love how Riker's just like "yeah well we thought we'd take you home since you follow us around everywhere anyway... there's people that want to gawk so we're humoring them too. It's not like we're SUPPOSED to take in delta-humans or anything." m lockjaw art... I love how Scott just stares at everything, like a kid in a candy shop and there is Riker saying "we can come back so don't buy everything all at once." It's so great. Love it!
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-07-23 ch 20,	Well, I think I am behind on my reading. I recall reading this bit before, or the beginning of it. I'm enjoying re-reading it while I wait though. I love when Riker comes and saves Scott. Love it. And the keeping him from saving Briean... Poor Scott having to know what was happening and not being able to do anything... I think this may have been the last chapter I read up to, though, because I don't remember what happens after this! I'm worried that Scott was right and that Riker will be mad... pets riker I do so love that lockjaw... Anyhow, good chapter!
cocobutta 2005-05-03 ch 1,	I really love this sorry. It has become one of my favs, it has me checking every other day for an update. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! B:o) And I really love your art also. You should try to get published either in novels maybe even graphic novels. P.S. Please update soon and often...
sam 2005-03-06 ch 1,	Love this first chapter,but the way the dialogue and conversation between the lockjaws is put out,it's a bit confusing. But overall,it's wonderful. Just a question left,who's Shayin?Will we be hearing about her in later chapters?Just curious...
sam 2005-03-06 ch 21,	Amazing stuff! Really,this is great! Are you going to make a novel out of this or what?I mean...Ah! I can't wait for the next chapter! P.S. I noticed a few missing comnas(,) here and there,but nothing else. Again ,Ilove this,very original!
Sparkle Itamashii 2005-02-19 ch 19,	"The Wae was hot on his heels, and was almost within range when Scott broke from the tree line and disappeared into a heard of large deer-like creatures. Briean watched sadly as the wolf leapt headlong into the herd of Kakrikies. It did not understand that nothing was prey on Tsaritartion." ~~Into the [herd] of large KAKRIKY RACERS I love those things. " It did not understand that nothing was prey on Tsaritartion." grins Poor thing. sad look Poor Briean. I liked him. ;.; I liked Terik, more, though. I hope they are okay. Well obviously Briean's prolly not okay but... And Scott, I hope he made it away from the Kakrikies in one piece. ^.^ When you finish this book, I'm gonna go through it for real and comb for errors and stuff but I want to enjoy it the first time around and there's hardly ever anything that jumps out so kudos on that!

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