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| silverscreen crush 2008-01-13 ch 13,  | abusehaha what a rough ending hope you update soon, or you know, anytime in this century lol |
| silverscreen crush 2008-01-13 ch 9, | abusehahah where'd you get sam from? |
| lime green day 2005-08-11 ch 13, anon. | abusei luved this story but i wished it would have had a happier ending. it made me deppressed :( |
| i-rite-gud 2005-08-06 ch 13, | abuseI loved what Lee said to Kiley on the last line but I'm sad that Danielle moved away with Caitlin and won't be coming back. Perhaps Lee will find another girl in the future (I know you're not writing any more to this story). Over all: I loved the story and I wish it wouldn't have ended so soon though it was a really good ending even if it was some-what sad. |
| i-rite-gud 2005-08-06 ch 12, | abuseOh this is so sad but also so good. I can't wait to read more, I love this story. It makes me sad that there's only one more chapter left. |
| Aversion2sunlight 2005-07-12 ch 12, | abuseWell first off, I think I'm horribly confused, and then I think I'm going to read the entire thing again... and give you a proper opinion. I think I like it so far anyway. |
| Prissknight 2005-07-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseLee and Danniele together please.. |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 11, | abusePlease update soon! this is a really cool story and I want to see what happens next! |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 10, | abuseUh oh... This can't be good... What will happen next? Dun dun dun... |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 9, | abuseThat was so cute! I wonder what will happen when Danielle figures out that it's the same Lee she knew... Or does she already know and is just pretending like Lee? |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 8, | abuseOh! That was adorable! |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 7, | abuseOh! Cute-ness! |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 6, | abuseCool chapter! That was cute! |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 5, | abuseThat was so cute... |
| i-rite-gud 2005-06-17 ch 4, | abuse*gaspith* What now?... |