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Reviews For: The Happy Man

Jezsh
2005-12-19
ch 1,
abusewow nice references...like the nuggets of mythology thrown it. Really good.
TJ Henri
2004-10-07
ch 1,
abuseAnd nobody else sees Updike, one of the first existentialists.
xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox
2004-10-06
ch 1,
abuseOoh, I love the references to Greek Mythology. You know, there is this one question I have about God, and how can God be real if there is a bunch of different Gods out there? Besides, the bible never even mentions dinosaurs. How bizarre. Anyway, this poem was well-percieved. I always love things that have something referring to Greek in them. Anyways, once again, the impeccable word choice depicts the story that you're weaving perfectly, and I'm only left speechless by this pure perfection. I love it, in short. Au revoir.
chibichocobo
Pico the Great
2004-10-05
ch 1,
abuseA new viewpioint. Good job there. (Look! I'm taking notice!)
Kudis!
-PTG
Mr. Arnold
2004-10-03
ch 1,
abuseYou are using a greek myth in relation to our own human strugles am I right?
very well dont I quite like that the way you pulled it off. a little off on rythm though but if its totally free verse that is fine. good work and please keep the promise of R&R my work
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