I love this poetical story. So great and tragic. Good Job!

You have a very expressive and clear style that I adore. *hugs* Thankyou so much for the reviews and kind words. I love reviews. They make me feel warm inside. *dreamy sigh* I love love your poems. They always give me an image or inspire me to write something. *giggels* I can't help but praise you ! Your a genious when it comes to your work !!
~ Noelle ~

Oh.My.God.
This is so awesome, I have no words to describe it. Definately going on my favorites. I'm definately reading more of your stuff. This left me speechless. Really.
- Jo

I love this. Especialy the end. Why is it that all poems seem to end better than they start. I love all things oriental really htough i can't say i know much about them lol.
Great idea, really original, keep it up. ^-^
kawaii

beautiful!! turning poetry into a story, i luv those, especially the sad ones, like this =) if only this was longer, and i dont really understand the plot in this.. does this relate to the chinese calender? wonderful poem!!

Revealing how you feel about your father. The divorce really hurt. You dwell on this still. Time will not heal your wounds if you hold onto anger. Believe in youself, find happiness in your soul and know that you have been and always will be loved so much.

I love this poem, it's cool. Nice language, very good :)

Beautiful story. m