Ah, very very nice work. O'l reliable denial there to save the day right? "As I hit the floor, It's your face I see, But I deny it, I'll deny it until the end". It seems we almost love to hate denial. We absolutely love to see what what we want happen, and who's to say it didn't if we really and truly make ourselves believe that it did. Sure, in the end we might crash and burn horribly, get hurt and vow never to deny the truth ever again, but hey it's worth those percious moments when everything is right... right? This espically comes to play in relationships, or "love". Now yes love does truly exist as we all know, weather or not we choose to believe it. It's just almost hard to imagine that something so completely and blissfully amazing can turn into something so horrible. That something that seems so right be so wrong, and something that can take you so high can drop you just like that. But maybe perhaps the highs are worth the lows? Or maybe we could just deny everything bad thats happening, or do we already and just one denial leads to another event which leads to another denial until we don't even remember what's really happening in our lives. The human mind, helping or hurting? Love isn't the only thing that kills.

the imagery was well done... and the descriptions brought out the poem really well. the first stanza's really strong, and it made me want to read on... you're a good writer, keep trying! ;)
p.s. thanks for the add to favs. really appreciated!

OO thats really good. I love the way you create the feeling of falling. great writing is all i have to say. if you can plz check out mine and give me some tips.
~*~Ana~*~

its good...there's something more than the angst i can feel...great work...but i don't think the word sell on the 2 line stanza is a bit unlikely...desperate for rhyming words?...well its still fantastic..oh and pls...if you ahve the time...pls do review some of my works...thanks...bye,...