"...The bodies of the lovers dance as they hang from a tree..."I liked that line. It's so creepy. I had shivers go down my spine. And the girl who burns the roses. Wow. My favorite line, however, is "...Grass that grows with flowers painted on the...now brown...flowers replaced...by bones...and hearts of others.I liked the (...), which made the poem seem like I was dreaming myself. Great job.

beautiful piece, but dark, much like your title says. :) i like this a lot. awesome imagery, i love the fantasies of your dreams. wonderful job on this. keep up the fantastic work!

to my opinion it was ironic. The flow is so perfect and I love the way you changed the good things into bad things so well. great work.

Amazing poem. Fantastic wording :)

(And thanks for all the reviews)

Woa! I liked how you started out with something happy, then suddenly changed it into something gruesome. Very vivid!

Wow. This is really touching. I'd give it five stars if I could do that. Anyway, I was wondering if you could r&r the story that Strife and myself wrote. It's called Eye of the Dragon and I think you might like it. So please, if you can, read it and review it for us?

Wow..thats really..interesting? Very dark and depressing...but still really good. You are definitely a poet. And RuathaWehrling , the first reviewer, wow. i wish more people would review like that. We need some constructive criticism.

i liked it, it was very dark and demented but yet, like you said, that can be beautiful sometimes. Great imagery!

I can't even tell you how much I love this poem! The contrast, the imagery, it's amazing! AWESOME JOB! :)

SICK! SICK! I love this =D I love your style.

Whoa... that was so creepingly beautiful. Nice little piece of work.. in a scary kind of way... ^_^

Whoa this is so wicked. I love how you change everything in to something more dark and sinsister. It's really amazing!

This is beautiful and would make a really good prologue for a story. Seriously.

Uh-oh, I thought this was going to be something short. Eh heh heh. My bad. *bows* Sumimasen. I'll review this when you put it where it's supposed to go.

Gah! How'd I miss this? Oh well. This is a good beginning, I like how it reminds me of the intros to Radical Dreamers and Chrono Cross (if you haven't played CC, you should, it's a beautiful story). It will aide my sanity to read more.