|Reviews for Helping Me|
| MaHaLLz 11/14/04 . chapter 1
nice. i can really feel this. keep writing!
| Cry Tears of Darkness 10/9/04 . chapter 1
thats pretty cool too
| MovingLife 10/5/04 . chapter 1
Nice poem. Personally I'd prefer it if the last line was "Can you help this girl? For the beauty's lost on me." Keep 'em coming!
| Ashes of a Willow 10/4/04 . chapter 1
I liked the questions and the imagery was great. I also liked the rhymes here! keep up the great work
| Deep Shadows 10/4/04 . chapter 1
I loved this.
You are very detailed in your work.
Hope to read more of your stuff.