I like this poem... reminds me of the civil war, though, for some odd reason. I don't suppose it was made for that? M.. probably not. Great job anyways :D

Discreetlycan our wounds be healed.One touch to leave ourselves groundedforeverin the torch of detahonly to once againburn in life.-Just a little poem that came to me as I read this. I really can't beleive that you havn't gotten more reviews, your work is so fresh and unique in the voice that you are using to speak to the world with.Please write more soon.

Much love,Juliet.