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blackrobewriter 2005-07-09 . chapter 1
Wow, that is amazing. You're amazing!
eyes of sky 2005-02-01 . chapter 1
this was good, but it seemed a little...childish at times. don't misunderstand me, i loved your descriptions and especially the verse before last, but i felt that the third and second verses got a little unoriginal. i think it may be because of the way you set it out, the short lines?? hope this makes some sense and is vaguely helpful, or at least interesting!
Shahr 2005-01-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Couldn't have said it better myself.
Zarancids 2004-12-04 . chapter 1
I liked these kinds of poems...simple lanuguage and slightly dissonant but still well written. Nice work.
Jen 2004-11-23 . chapter 1
Well, can't say I know much about poetry, but I liked it. In particular, the personification device.
Chocolate Mouse 2004-11-23 . chapter 1
It was good, but it needed more ears.
Ghastly Innocence 2004-06-12 . chapter 1
I am impressed. It was well written, and everything seemed to flow very nicely.
Congrats on a job well done!
Ghastly
the mouse that roared 2004-02-04 . chapter 1
I liked it. It liked the repitition of "spirits of the wood" and then the surprise change at the end. It relates fanciful creatures to our real world and makes one think differently about trees.
Crazy In 88 2004-01-25 . chapter 1
This is a very good poem. I know its short, but i aint got much more to say ^^. Please r/r me.
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Micol Wydor 2003-11-04 . chapter 1
I can almost see them...

A few spelling errors, but all around very good.
Kyaroru Fanel 2003-08-13 . chapter 1
Great rhythm, and beautiful choice of words.
Excel 2003-05-29 . chapter 1
Wow, that was a really cute poem. I like this poem very much. Keep writing!
Tiffany Kremer 2002-05-29 . chapter 1
*Gaps, her jaw hanging open. She quickly closes it and blinks*

Er...you know, I'm not all that great with reviewing poetry, but this was great! I loved the descriptions you used in this, the comparing the emotions you have in this. I really liked this stanza:

Kind-hearted and gentle
Spirits of the Wood
Weeping, wailing
with the rain
Blessing, sheltering
all they know.

I thought that was very nicely done, as well as the rest, but to me, that one just stuck out. I really loved this. A lot of people think for in order for a poem to be good, it has to rhyme. That is very not true. There are many people with poetry that don't rhyme that are truely great, and yours is one of them.

This was really a very well written piece of writing. You really have talent for poetry.
Fireborn Darkness 2002-05-24 . chapter 1
Wow! That was really good! The description was awesome. I also like the way you made the poem flow, I've never really seen it done that way, and it works well! Great job, and thanx for reviewing my poem!
Audrey1 2001-02-12 . chapter 1
i like it!!!! very good!!!
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