Such a romantic poem. My second fave type of poem after dark and angsty. LOL.

such a sweet poem and very nicely written. You have a unique style that is soft and graceful. Keep up the great work :)

Thanks so much. The first stanze/para is melodious. I've worked up the tune and kinda borrowed the beat/rythm Brian from McKnight's song-I forget the name (in case you are a fan of his ;)

oh i love the way this is stated
very good usage of words - it gets annoying when people use words over and over again so its a relief reading something like this!
good job!