|Reviews for Stop The Spinning|
| myno 10/15/04 . chapter 1
there's a whole world out there
and I'm missing it...
i love those two lines. again, beautifully written poem.
| kerbieflaw 10/10/04 . chapter 1
somehow, i felt the poem... all that spinning and twirling... rather well done, although not your best, but the emotion was good. ;) keep writing.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 10/8/04 . chapter 1
spinning! my brains spining! hehe! yeah... cool peom!
| confused being99 10/6/04 . chapter 1
I like it, its like..falling out of love...and put in a quiet way sorta. very good. keep writing