The first paragraph almost gave me the shivers. Nice work.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely summer and a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~

Hey nice!!

It's got this creepiness around it. You are great with words.

Good job

~Ian

dang, that's very deep. It puts wonderful pictures in my mine's eye! ^_^ You should write like this more often!

~The Goddess of Night