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bobby5155 2009-11-01 . chapter 2
Sorry, you lost me. They're already falling for each other two chapters in? No.
Clazziquai Project 2009-04-26 . chapter 4
I am just loving this story. I thought they fell for each other too quickly, but I can overlook that. Btw I noticed an error in your French. I think you meant "je t'aime", but I may be wrong.
nomy 2008-01-11 . chapter 20
i read you story in one go..and damn you good..i nearly got a heart attack when you kill off Valmont..i was screaming when he died..and i love how you've done a twist of werewolves as normally writer tend to do vampiric story and i never been involved in werewolves so its a good twist at first...and i notice a sequel but its not completed or you stop writing it?..and im confused on Brett ..is like hes not that evil isnt he?just a twisted sick person who rapes other people brother ..hahaha ok, hes that evil but i kinda like him when he being all nice to ambrose ...ok thats it..but hell i love your story so i will be sure to find more of your writing..!! ^_~
darrena 2007-11-15 . chapter 19
I enjoyed reading this story very much! Now I'm off to read the sequel. :)
YourMyOnlyHope 2007-10-17 . chapter 20
Beautiful story,
Though i was reading the other one when i read how Amborse and Valmont died why did they die in that way did you want to make it more sad or what?
komodo dragon 2006-12-25 . chapter 17
Thank you! I was getting worried.
komodo dragon 2006-12-25 . chapter 14
BRING HIM BACK! EVIL! WHY?! that is so wrong! do something!
komodo dragon 2006-12-25 . chapter 5
WHAT? how... why...who...huh? what did you do? I LOVE IT! Nice plot twist I didn't see that coming. One question though how is that going to effect the out come? They are still going to be together right?
komodo dragon 2006-12-25 . chapter 2
I like it, a little fast but all in all nice.
Torn Butterfly 2006-01-16 . chapter 20
TB: I'm back! Ha ha ha! And look! I got Leon and Billy! *Pats the twenty some odd bishies on the head* Good boys!

Leon: Are you working with Umbrella?!?

TB: *Pouts* Of course not. DOWN WITH UMBRELLA!

Billy: *Smirks* I like her already.

TB: *Puppy eyes* Really!?! Whee! *Ahem* Anywho, I really loved this story! I about bawled when I thought Valmont was dead. And Octavius and Victor got together! kawaii! Loved it and can't wait for another chapter of part 2!

Youko: -_-

Leon: @_@ *Whispers to Billy* I don't know who the hell you are, but we've got to get out of here. She's more crazy than Wesker. And look at all of the wierd experiments she must be doing on those poor men.

TB: Aww. Already they're plotting escape. How cute, but its useless. Kouga found that out soon enough. And I don't experiment! They're demons and vampires! *Stops foot* How can you not believe that when all of the crazy stuff that happens at Umbrella?!?

Youko: *Turns to Sess* I did it last time. Besides, she likes you more.

Sess: -_- Not if my life depends on it.

TB: FLUFFY! *Pounces on Sess* You came back! I knew the chip would work! And I love your fluffy tail. Hmm. *Snuggles into Sess's tail.* Oh yeah, I can't wait for more of your writing! Keep writing!

Billy: -_- Yeah, she's a freak.

TB: Be nice and I'll let you go outside! If your naughty you'll end up in the closet with Kyo!

Kyo: >_< Someone let me outta here!
Raziel Ç 2005-07-05 . chapter 6
Pretty nice story.I like it very much.
fluffy 2005-06-12 . chapter 19
okay i forgive you for killing Valmont, ur happy ending definitely made up for it! u should write a sequel! I loved the story!
fluffy 2005-06-12 . chapter 17
OMG!Very nice twist! and i thought he was really dead! thanks for bringing him back! tis good! keep writing!
fluffy 2005-06-12 . chapter 14
i luv ur story but you killed Valmont, YOU **! im sry but...it ** me off...oh well i'll get over it...good story tho! keep writing!
Silver Daratraz 2005-01-10 . chapter 20
okay will do...
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