...wow. Really nice poem. The imagry/vocab you used really brought out emotional response. You must be in encriched English or whatever they call it at your school.

MY this is so sad. I absouluty love it i adore it as i do all of your poetry please email me as soon as you have a chance. I am so sad i didnt discover this sooner it is awesome reminds me of a lovecraft poem mixed with a mckennit song. Sniff now excuse me i must read it again.

That was really well written, quite a bit of hidden meanings and connotations. The Norse Mythology touches of Valhalla, Niflheim and Hela were really nice, gave the poem a historical feel.