 Crewger 2006-12-27 . chapter 26neh, I forgot to ask something in the prequel, where are the goldfishes?!
kinda confusing to me though, blue has a lot of alias. |
 supplanter-of-tomorrow 2006-06-27 . chapter 2Oh sniff, so abrupt. But that's life. I mean death. I mean..I'm confused. *8) |
 supplanter-of-tomorrow 2006-06-27 . chapter 1Yay! Pulse and arc! Whe! Sorry, just happy to be reading this stuff again.
"Greetings, criminals." OMG that is a good line. I swear, I was in stitches (whatever that means :P).
I like the words you use. You did that ships "mating" thing, which I think is cool, and also...erm, can't find any at the moment, but they're in there.
In Dogs of a Revolution, you frequently used the word "acidly" to describe someone's speech. Will the pattern continue? *8) |
 Fleur-de-lis Evans 2005-12-24 . chapter 1That sounds a lot like star wars. Oh, well! I like it so far! |
 Quarantine 2005-07-08 . chapter 26Haha, yay, I finished both Blue stories in 2 days. . . pace yourself means nothing to me I guess, though Snow Speaker took me a while, I didn't just get obsessed. Wonder why? Oh well, hey, I was wondering, whatever happened to Jason from the first Blue story. It said he was Leon's 'brother' didn't it. That just seems a little odd to me, heh. I can't decide if I like these stories or the Vorchay ones better though. |
 Quarantine 2005-07-07 . chapter 9HAHA *is laughing really hard* I'm sorry, I had to do that. In that first part of this chapter you called him Vyk... *laughs some more*
See?: "Tohru, after that glare, dared not ask about his relationship with Blue. Instead, she was silent, watching Vyk out of the corner of her eye. He pulled a cigarette box from his pocket and lit it." |
 lagomilo 2005-06-15 . chapter 26I loved this story. Some parts went a little fast(to me at least) but most of flowed very well. I look forward to the next blue series or Fire Dancer. Thanks |
 Jenina 2005-04-18 . chapter 26Two words for you, doll: Holy. **.
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! I love how it was weaved together in such a lovely fashion. There were a few things here and there that need to be tweaked, but otherwise, it's great!
I have a personal hidden love for science fiction stories that also involve religion. I believe religion and science clash together so much in people's thoughts that it just makes an interesting read. Ever read the Crown of Stars series by Kate Elliott? Highly recommended.
// Cerulean Asphodel |
 jon-1308 2005-02-27 . chapter 26Another very good and thought-provoking story. With another interesting twist at the end.
I'll stop now, because I'm sure you have received enough compliments already :) |
 biminator 2004-12-29 . chapter 1hmm. I finally started this damn thing. very nice. I'm gona stop, though, until I read the other one. |
 ookami-metsuki 2004-11-28 . chapter 26m... I like, very good, its taken me the entire thangsgiving break to get through, and the time was well worth it. Amazing story, I think I'll wait around for the next one.
later, Kat (you know me as Neko, from yf ^_~) |
 Misora 2004-11-25 . chapter 14 "No, but I landed in a tree," Carpelli said, sounding distracted. "God damn piece of **! Ow! Jezus..."
*cackle*
^^ I liked this chapter. Quite humorous. |
 Misora 2004-11-25 . chapter 13 o_o... Eh. So, basically, everyone knows that she's immortal, now, and even though she hates being a major political figure, she's the second most powerful? o_o; |
 Misora 2004-11-25 . chapter 9 T__T... Sad.
And it's nice to see a good-side (eh?) politician with brains o.o |
 MIsora 2004-11-24 . chapter 2 *pathetic look* T__T Sad... |