Hey, great story! I enjoyed it

Wow. I really liked that. Kind of confusing, but seeing things through Laurie's eyes, it has to be. He must be confused too, right?

~Sasa

I like it hope you add another chapter

Neat! I really liked it, the way you describe everything and also the characters.. especially Laurie himself. Can't wait to meet his 'other self'! Hope you update soon! :)

Whoa! This was a deep and powerful start! All of the characters are so vivid and deveopled! I'm itching to know what happens next!