ah... sorry... i cant get this one now... ill probably look at it tomorrow or whenever and go 'wow!' but right now im recovering from a slipknot/slayer concert so i cant really think... it is pretty though... very nicely written... i just dont understand it (yet!)... well done though

The ending surprised me. Not because there was much of a twist, or anything, but because I scrolled down and saw that that was the last line. It seems to end abruptly-or maybe that's just my lack of sleep that's talking. I'll come back to try to understand it when I'm awake (notice how I'm asleep, but I'm STILL meticulous with grammar and spelling). Buh.