Hey, it's a great start, Harris showed it to me. Maybe I'll post my story as well. :)
Sucre-hija
aka
Zerimatawanishka

*sniff* more?
~K~

I already read this, but I wasn't able to tell you what i thought. Actually i hadn't thought of the rebirth of machines as a possiblity of the campaign, but now that you mentioned it it might be a very good thing to focus on. Question, will this be continued? (As GM I am not at liberty to write a story, Besides I don't need another one)
Later,
~Ffuffy~