This is a short, poignant piece that I'm sure millions of people can relate it. It has TALENT written all over it.

One of your best pieces, even though it's short. . You truly have a talent for words.

I love this. It's so simple and sweet, and very, very easy to relate to.

very nicely written, that's a great image. Short, but sweet. Hehe, it's not cliche, I am. :P

what a great idea! and a really good ending.

Beautiful. And I love its abstract undertow. You really create a beautiful yet painfully true metaphore through art. Again beautiful. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.