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| like a lover 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseoh my god, most amazing poem i've read in a long time. just simply amazing. just. oh. wow. i adore it. |
| moonarised polane 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abusethe last line was realy gd. "A-ducation". it really fits the whole education system here. you're certainly talented and i like the way you write angst without simply telling readers "i'm angry. so there.". ps thanks for your review. and yeah i do agree that i need more work for that one. it certainly is not one of my favourites. and yep. full of cliches. oh and i realised that i am quite biased against pop. but anyway, i have changed my bio because i was bored with the old one. yup. |
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseFantastic last stanza. Really effective manipulation of language. Be glad by the way. This is the fourth time i've tried to review this but my computer was being a bugger. Oh and by the way, if you aver feel like reading my work... |
| glitterjewele 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abuseah, very good. i like the way you bring a real situation to life, and then tie it into the moral at the end ~ it makes the message that much more powerful. great work! :D |