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| Abysmal Tr3pidation 2007-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so descriptive. I love it, you should write more poems just like this one because it is B-E-A-UTIFUL. Keep writing. ~**~Indiana~**~ |
| Only Infamous 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was excellent! I liked the rhymes and the way you made the statue (I assume it was one..?) seem human was so well done. Keep it up, PLEASE. ^_^ --xoxo-- |
| felicia13 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseOh .. sad. Good, though. I liked "They placed a rose in her hand,/Thornless with age, a marble bud." It was just .. um .. really good and it was just a really nice image. Good job! Lots of other good images, that I don't feel like pointing out at the moment. Just know that I thought it was a good poem. all my love,felicia p.s. I thought your profile was funny. |
| fuzzy-logik21 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abusethank you for the review. made me feel happy. lol. now, onto your poem. i like it. it gives me an image of maybe being limited, being held-back. Oh, what's the word i want? dang, i don't know. anyway, good poetry. there's definitely a ton of imagery. best lines, "the songbirds taught her to sing / but her lips were not made to part" it leaves this hauntingly beautiful image of being imprisoned by those that you love and that love you. toodles, thanks again for the review! peace love and cheese. |
| gagaga 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseuhm.. wow, you're really good.. you like literature that much.. i failed it sometimes.. thanks for the tip, and i really didn't mean to give myself a review, it was for somebody else.. don't know how the system works, haha.. THANKS again... |
| strawberry-margaritha 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseNice poem! Kinda sad, but its good. The name caught my eye... "ivy shadow" Sounds cool. I like that it rhymes. I've always felt that poems that don't rhym are kinda wierd... |
| Sugar....baboon? 2004-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuse*You* wrote this? Wowee, talk about pretty imagery. I now have a picture of a slowly eroding, moss covered yet beautiful statue imprinted into my mind. Haunting and very nice. Watch out, I may indeed rearrange the verses and publish it in my name... You shall get 5% of the royalties ~ -sugary bananas rock my world- |
| grim-dreamer 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abuse"Laughing, halfheartedly the wind proposed,/Then left her lonely to the night." Favourite line in the poem. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this poem; many poets forget the wonders of punctuation. |
| Rose of Darkness 666 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love the imagry used here. Nice job! |
| laughter at the funeral 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abuseohh..this is good...reminds me of the nymphs...oh my...you really did a good job...oh and pls...if you have the time pls do review some of my works...thanks...good luck and take care... |