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Reviews For: What You Gave Me
Lynn Studios 2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Yeah. This review is solely so I could add you to my favorites and whatnot.

M. This poem sounds pretty much what I would expect you to sound like at seventeen. You spelled 'feud' wrong in your author's notes.

Also, haha, this is hilarious because I just realized it was about your dad and that I know what a dickwad he is now and how you're not talking to him again.

Uh. Good poem, seventeen year old Jt?

Nutz 2006-02-17 . chapter 1
Wow. Very nice. I like how it stars with the bow and pretties of life and progresses to what he made you feel and then how you beat it and found the high points. Does that make sense? Still liked it.
rotted reverie 2004-10-13 . chapter 1
I like the idea, great job!!
Becky27 2004-10-09 . chapter 1
I liked this, I really did. My favourite line had to be 'fear of failure, quiet tears' - it was just terribly fitting and nicely portrayed. Also, the last verse for the same reasons. A beautiful piece of poetry!
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