 Lynn Studios 2009-04-08 . chapter 1Yeah. This review is solely so I could add you to my favorites and whatnot.
M. This poem sounds pretty much what I would expect you to sound like at seventeen. You spelled 'feud' wrong in your author's notes.
Also, haha, this is hilarious because I just realized it was about your dad and that I know what a dickwad he is now and how you're not talking to him again.
Uh. Good poem, seventeen year old Jt?
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 Becky27 2004-10-09 . chapter 1I liked this, I really did. My favourite line had to be 'fear of failure, quiet tears' - it was just terribly fitting and nicely portrayed. Also, the last verse for the same reasons. A beautiful piece of poetry! |