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Kira 2008-05-01 ch 29, anon.	abuseAwesome. Well played. It was really long, which was definitely a good thing, and you certainly played with all of my emotions! One thing that irritated/upset me with the whole Hero situation was the fact that I just wanted Paris to tell her that what he had done to her (getting with Seb) had been done exactly to him when Seb turned him down. And she never realised! So he was all hurt but unable to express it, and she got to vent her anger! Made me very sympathetic towards Paris. But seriously, awesome story!
isagallagher 2008-01-21 ch 29,	abuseJust wanted to drop a line to say this was probably the best fic I've read in FP, ever. Which was why I've been reading for hours, lol. But srsly, your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Amazing job! ;D
TeodoraKagome 2007-12-30 ch 29,	abuseWow, amazing story! It's the kind of on it's feet story which really resembles real life. Sorry about my stupid review, but my writing skills come and go. And now they're gone. T_T Anyways, what I wanted to is Congratulations on this amazing story! Right. Erm... Bye? ^_^ ~Teodora
FalseReflections 2007-10-23 ch 29,	abuseOh wow, its finished!! yay!stretches I was just GLUED to the computer for the whole, freakin, day just reading this, all 29 chapters of it. It took about 18 hours for me, with lots of breaks in between, to finish this, in case you are wondering. And i loved every minute of it, i assure you. First off, what really made this my kind of fic is how the relationship and sexuality issues are approached and developed gradually, lending this story some much appreciated realness and depth and not just conveniently starting with "I'm gay and, ooh, look, hot guy!". I loved the angsty bits, those moments when (oh, so sweet) denial was displayed in both characters. And you made their school seem more like a real school. I'm not goingto go into detals. i just felt real. Characterisation. THank GOD you proved yourself to be a master of this, because both Paris and Sebastian just clicked so well with each other and it would not have been possible without your (masterful) skills. But what really impressed me were the other, more minor characterstha seem to come alive on their own, even without you going too much into deatil into them, like Dunk and Gabe and even Erika. And I'm glad that thr were some other subplots to spice things up, like the thing with Seb's dad(I KNEW he was gonna pop up somewhere! hah!) but i'm glad you stayed true to the story. Hm...i usually write longer reviews but i'm really...really tired and happy and i wanno go to sleep happy. Just know that this is one of the most wonderfully written stories i have yet to come across here and...yeah. Keep writing!! PS: I wouldn't mind more sex scenes ;P
Zakuyoe 2007-10-06 ch 1,	abuseaha... **... phoque... that's pretty funny. =P
Lady Leing 2007-09-28 ch 20,	abuseI really want Seba to break up with Hero. It'll be more awful for her, the poor girl. He really, really shouldn't be pronloonging it, and I hope he listens to what Dani just told him. I am very disaproving of what Seb and Paris are doing, but anyways, it kind of makes them more human, with flaws and all. I really feel bad for Hero, she loves the guy, and he's cheating on her, with her freakin brother. Very, very soap opera-y. But still good and pretty real. :) AND I STILL REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY EVEN THOUGH IT MAKES ME FEEL A LOT OF EMOTIONS WHICH IS A TOTALLY GOOD THING BY THE WAY. heart
magalina 2007-09-27 ch 29,	abuseAw, happy ending. It sucked, in the first chapters, when they were fighting ;__; But I´m glad I read this now, seeing as the sequel is coming soon (according to your profile). So~ This was awesome, I love Paris. Seb too, but Paris was ´special :P I hope we see more of the group in the sequel D: Can´t wait!!
Lady Leing 2007-09-27 ch 15,	abuseGod, Poor Paris. :( But they'll end up together, so I'm not really worried. But still, you're doing really incredible with writing emotions in your story.:D "pas gueule de bois "--> "pas de gueule de bois " :)
Lady Leing 2007-09-27 ch 13,	abuseby the way, the appropriate french equivalent of the "my *" expression is "mon oeil" (My eye) not "mon cul". French is my second language (like non-whiteamerican people learn english because they were born in america, I learned when cause I'm born in a french surroundings. So trust me on this. Even if it sounds kind of weird.)mhh, but if Paris isn't good in french, then nevermind about what I just said. AH! Sebastian have freckles right?? love* God, I love freckles on caucausian boys!! heart ...Not the ones that look like zits, mind you, more like the very pretty ones that blend with the skin tone of the person and all.
Lady Leing 2007-09-27 ch 12,	abuseLove how they know eachother so well, even though they're fighting and supposedly not best friends anymore. For some reasons, I don't feel any chemistry at ALL between Hero and Seba. I just feel... nothing when I read about them. ANyways, it's not because it got in between the main couple or anything, it's just because... I can't feel anything when I read about them, and their relationship. On the other hand, I could feel some chemistry between Braelyn and Seba. Anyways, I'm rambling, the thing I wanted to say is, I don't really get why they're together when they're so... weird as a couple. In my opinion, I mean. I really feel like Hero is being used subconsciously by Seba. Poor girl. I enjoy her character, she seems like a good person. And for some reasons, I just reallyy like Gabe. And I'm fond of Paris. But it took quite some time, but I'm really attached now. And Seba, he's a sweetie, just a bit confuse, so is Paris, I think. Anywyas, I still love the story love I't's really, really good. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to read the next chapter(s) right now. Thanks for writing this :)
Lady Leing 2007-09-27 ch 11,	abuseI feel like Braelyn is pregnant... I don't know if it's this, but I just have this feeling... And I hope it's not true. If it is, well, WHOOT for me! And for the twist too! Love the story! You're a great author, and everything seems realistic and dramatic, but less dramatic than most stories. What I want to say is: you don't go over the top and exagerate everything with a LOT of angst and all. This is such a well-written story, you have no idea how happy and thankful I am to have found it! And uhm, by the way, in case you didn't notice already, I know my english is weird sometimes, and forgive me for it: it's my third language.
Lady Leing 2007-09-26 ch 9,	abuseAw, great, I'm crying like a baby. Which means I am totally fond of your characters, and that your descriptions are great. I love hot you can easily write something full of emotion, with a specific the atmosphere. Love that chapter.
Lady Leing 2007-09-26 ch 7,	abuseHe's not gay, he's bisexual leaning toward women. Same thing with Seba, I assume. They make such a good couple. love Great story, by the way. ;)
decline 2007-09-23 ch 29,	abusei read this about a year ago, i think? but i thought i'd come back and do a reread. it's such a good story. i really like paris. and gabe. not so much sebastian though :\| his actions throughout the story -while i could understand his ** reasons behind them- just frustrated me too much.
firedraygon97 2007-09-18 ch 29,	abuseAbsolutely fantastic fic. I love their relationship. The ** banter is so fun to see, and how they figure out they're in love with each other makes me happy. Great work with this! ~firedraygon97

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