Okay, I love your story so far, and I know it's "complete." I'm going to finish reading it but I highly recommend that you put some sort of break between you author's notes and the story. Some of the power of the end is lost if I start reading the end note, thinking the chapter isn't over yet. Just put some dashes or stars or something. It's a little thing, but I think it makes a big difference.

WTF! HERO?! NNO! haha. Actually good twist i guess you would say? great story so far!

Great job this was fantastic! I fucking loved it!

I LOVE IT
very interesting beginning.
i'll be sure to finish the whole thing tmrww.

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well you got the drama part right. i actually read up to chapter 10 about 2 years ago, maybe more because i don't think it was finished yet. and this is all i'm gonna read now, so maybe one day i'll finish this story. i guess is because your characters are so well written,and unfortunately, (for me anyway, because this is actually probly a story worth reading,) both the main characters are not people i like very much or want to read about. especially sebastian, because i tend to steer clear of people like that in real life, the ones who can't figure out themselves, so u can see why it would be hard to read about him. paris doesn't impress me either. not to mention it has to be a really good 'slice of life' story to keep me interested, and that does not include high school fics.

so after all of that why the hell did i even read this far and am now reviewing? because i truly admire how deep into your characters' heads you are,and how you can translate it into words, and keep them separate. they feel like real people with real issues. i think you are an amazing writer

this story was long. It felt like it was moving in real-time even though it did skip 5 months in the middle. Im extremely happy they ended up together though. I think I would have majorly upset to have read all 29 chapters just to have them end up with random strangers. So congrats on the ending.

I think the whole seba dating Paris's sister and then having Paris suggest that Seba cheat on his sister was a little weird but hey... that's drama for you.

I did enjoy this story though...so thank you

You my friend...are a genius!! This is easily the BEST story I've ever read on here. Heck, the best story I've ever read period. I absolutely loved it. I started around 4 in the morning, and it is now 2 in the morning as I write this. (I do hope I can finish this before I pass out.) I just wanted to tell you you're an incredible writer, and I hope to be able to write a masterpiece even close to yours. It's just too bad this is where Paris, and Sebastian's story ends. Oh, well. Time to go check out Gabe's story. =D Just wanted to congratulate you on this.

Woah.

I adored this story. ^_^
Seba is so cute and awkward and romantic.
And Paris is an arsehole, but I hate help but love him too xD

I loved this story from when Seba first kissed Paris on his birthday and then when they stopped talking to each other for 5 months. -(actually i hated this bit! 5 months is a long time -__-)
I also really loved the bit when Seba told Paris he loved him and then Paris jumped on him. So gorgeous!

Anyway, I loveloveloved it x]
(incase that wasn't clear xD)

Happy belated Val's Day!

it's funny that you made paris look like orlando bloom since orlando played Paris int the movie troy =) and paris in that movie was a womanizing pretty boy as well, no that I have a problem with that

This is wonderful. Like utterly awesomely well done, and your teenagers are somewhat more like real teenagers, except for... the things that happen to them. But hey, its fiction. Suspension of disbelief ftw.

Why do you not have more reviews? I mean, there are stories I've read that have double the amount but are utter shit. =[

Great Story, keep up the good work.

This story was so wonderful!
I absolutely loved it :]

I love the dialogue between the characters!

LOVE'D IT!! It was such a good read!

LOVE IT - i just read the whole damn thing ! Very nice stuff- My only technical comment is, maybe work on your transitions in the beginning ( if you ever revise or redo) I got a little lost in there ^_^ Well done on the ending