I love that this poem makes you think, and imagine. Its inspiration at its best! well done! :D

It's a brilliant piece of poetry! Glad that you posted in here, keep up the good work!

Oh, beautiful, so beautiful! And unique as well...

~Mlle. Daae

I love this poem! Its very tranquil. You can really tell what you were feeling. I like how the vocab is strung. very nice.

LOVED IT and relate to it.

i like it really good imagry

very interesting, inspired by fantasy itself, i presume...nice imagery too, you can see it.

marvolous! simply marvolous! this is great. if it isn't your best work then i would absolutly be blowen away by the really good stuff.

Oh wow.
See, regardless of whether this is your best work or not, I give it love because it is entirely comprised of ocean-metaaphor.
And considering my love for the ocean exceeds even normal worship...well.
I also like the way you capture one moment and how long it feels. Something like that happened to me once. I'll lj you about it.
Nice job, regardless.