Nice storyKind of real..>.

i like your writing style.the plot is ok too. its not bad but to me it isnt that exciting.but dont mind me cuz these stories arent usually my cup of tea anyway.

-whats that in a can? its um of course!

short, sweet and no major grammatical mistakes. just what i need. thank you.

Aw, nice ending :]

Ack! Must get on to the next chapter. But I just needed to review this. ^__^

Yess! Go Hakari! Whoo! Cheer. Lol. Nice chapter.

Aww, sad twist with the sister :[ & those similarities are definately ironic.

Ah she stops stuttering :] How cute!

Love this beginning. Nice how they notice each other right away in the beginning of the year. *thumbs up*

That was... so sad. T_T;; So well written and so perfect for a manga! It has that feeling of those little mini-mangas they have at the back of bigger volumes, you know? Really, really well done. :D

wow thats great i'm not usually into romance or any thing like that but this was a brilleint story oh by the way. the demons will devour your brains and eat your breakfast.

Kinda fast moving, but I really liked it! ^-^ I'm so glad they made it in time! ^-^

This story is beautiful. I mean mean it. It has so much meaning it's words and it really connected to me. It has so many layers and it all just - makes sense. You write brilliantly. I do not have enough words to say how wonderful this story is. I will read it and read it over and over and treasure this story. This story is beautiful.

this is a wonderful story that beautifully portrays the meaning of hope and the ability to finally let go and move on after a tragic event.

This was such an awsome story, it was so sad i almost cried. (i really don't cry easy so it was pretty damn sad at times). I love how they all became freinds at the end, the perfect ending (no pun intended). And your description is nuts, it's really good. Anyhoo, i must flee on my donkey now, so i shall. (P.S. when are you putting up another chapter in Descent to Sanctuary. I really like that one). Bye Bye.