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Yoho! Hello there! When is your next update gonna be? We are all WAITING here! Come on already! Get writing! ) *and she waits, and waits, and waits...*

Very beautifully written. Nice description, but not offensive. I like your writing style.

very well written. Amazing descriptions and very sensual. Good job and keep it up!

Well - what can I say about this? You're a fabulous writer. That shows. And I'm glad you're writing what seems to be an intelligent romance, here. It's not your typical blonde thing meets rogue and the two argue for a while before falling into bed with each other.
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Your premise seems highly UN-romantic at first. How can it be love when money is exchanged? But, if this indeed is the first chapter in a much larger story, I'm willing to buy into it. Please continue.

Baby, eh? Well, now this sounds like somthing worth reading! lol! Anyways, good job done there! Now that I know that this wasn't just one chapter...I'll be nagging you to update! (I'm known for it) Haha! Anyways, like I always say: UPDATE SOON! I can't wait to see what happen next! )

This was beautiful! I can't wait for the rest of their story, especially considering she's now pregnant... or so you said. She better be... I want more of these two. I really do like Caelan (and I love the Irish name by the way). Update soon! :o)

Well. . .this story proved more popular than I thought it would. Sweet. XD Thanks, everybody, for your reviews. Keep them coming! _;;
Tomorrow? You mean with Caelan and Suzette? Well, I could tell you, but then you'd have no reason to read the story I'll eventually write about them and the BABY they're going to have. Oops. Now I've said too much. Fooey.

what happens tommorow?

Wonderful job! I don't know how to congratulate you for your amazing work on this story. The detail was amazing! Enough to get anyone going.. I was captivated by this. Bravo! I hope to read something like it soon

Oh my God! That was perfect. Just reading it aroused me! Keep up the good writing... especially ones of this genre. ;)

Well written and i like the way u wrote the actions...good work!

Hm, pretty good. Hot, and steamy! You do have a way with words ya know...