Interesting... I really liked it, actually. I loved the line "If yyou need some sky for your shadow". I didn't really understand it, but it was really beautiful. I love the repetitiveness, too. Keep up the awesome work!

Amputations? *looks down* AH! WHERE ARE MY LEGS? MY LEGS? AH! ...lol, just kidding...I'm beginning to sound like Gaki aren't I? Weird... I liked that though, it was at least interesting...

Simple and very beautiful. It's lurvely!

cool. i liked it, though a tad bit confusing, it sounded great. good job!

Very nice poem. Its so sweet. I like it a lot, MAGNIFIQUE!
*DooWopBop*

interesting! Keep up the great work
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