Look, to that Alice chick? I am no **. Your very sick in the head, I think. Im 14, and I just happened to find a guy that I fell in love with - I know my age makes it seem impossible, but it happened. Im not self centered. I never have been. All my life Ive been teased and picked on for who I am, and what I look like. Finally, its stopped, because I am a little pretty, and ive found my independance. So in other words, ** you **, because I take ** from people like you every day. Get a life, and go write something for yourself before criticising my work - actually, you didnt even do that. You criticised me, this isnt the place to do it. You wanna criticise me, dont do it here - I want comments on my work, not on ME. So go find some medication, or find someone who can retaliate in RL instead of picking on people like me

Beautiful..

hey miss thang, cool it how old are u anyway like 13...why do u feel compelled to share deep thoughts and emotions suchb as these on the internet where umsympathetic people like me acan read them and think of u for what u are, a selfish, dependant nastey little girl who is so full of herself she feels the need to write a "poem" no more of a pity party about how wonderful she is, and how indepentent yet contradicts herself in saying that she cant live without this boy...hunny heres some advice, threatening to kill yourself because ur boyfriend knows ur a ** and wants to leave you is cheap, and ifu trap him like that he'll hate you...and learn to spell before u write this crap..then maybe ppl will stop laughing...so hard...at you..cool out life is too short to be this self centered

Wow. Thats very powerful. For me, this takes me to a place inside me where stuff has gone really wrong with people, and I still hold on to it. Thank you. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing big. again, Thank You.
Flirting

So much emotion, it was like I was trailing along with your thoughts, feeling sad and then angry, getting your own back on all the crap. Very nice work, keep writing

I like the ending!! Keep up the good work

A very honest and pure poem.. that's all I can say.

that was a great poem.very deep with strong emotions. i hope you feel better now and dont do anything regretful. seriously.
but great poem and very good detail.

This is very well put. You word yourself wonderfully. I like how you started out like you were really sorry and than got sarcastic and then blew being sorry off totally. Keep up the work.

Wow, beautifully written. A little confusing; you went two different ways with this. But I still loved it!
Keep writing!
~K~
P.S. R&R one of mine?