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| Quarter.Queen 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuselove the poem. Its very beautiful. |
| Dark Glass Bottles 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abusecool! i like how i went smoothly |
| MyNameIsMad 2006-10-02 ch 2, | abuseAgain, astounding. You should look into sending some of these to a literary magazine or something like that! -Mad |
| MyNameIsMad 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseNice. You've got a real talent for poety, let me tell you. -Mad |
| pianomasterette 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery in this poem. Good job! |
| LadyAnesta 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseoh, very dark. A great piece for October (and mostly, i'm just on a Halloween fetish today :)) utterly terrific! ~Anesta |
| Jitterrue 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseooh, I like it! |
| pudding wings 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was good, I like vampires. It's nice someone writes poems about them. |
| Furine Panpasu Kitsuchi 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseExcelent flow. I love the darkness of it. |
| nine iron 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI wish I could have the exposure these lucky few are getting. Hm not bad, not bad, I am off to watch buffy now, bye! |
| Angelous13 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseno words.. but chilling... good job ~~ |
| Sapphire Mirage 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot, being the biggest vampire fan out there. Continue writing, the rhyme added a lot to it as well. Check some of my work out sometime. |
| A.D Williams 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abuseFlows beautifully! ^^ Adoring the description ^_~ -Amber |
| JesscaB 2004-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's so awesome. I've tried to do the poetry thing... it never flows that well. It could be my obsessive obsession.. (heh..weird) with vampires... but just the way you worded that whole poem. Very awesome. |
| Raya Dronaile 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abusewow, wonderful poem. i liked it a lot. great discreptions, and great words you used. well done! |