very enticing and mesmerizing. beautiful, flowery descriptions - lovely work!

I do like this poem. Makes me think the Lord of the Rings forest thingy though. *frowns* Yeah, where that came from, I don't know...I don't know much about Unicorns though, I'm more into demons/dragons/angels type things, but I can read fluffy, nice stuff (sorry *poetry*) too! ^_^

i love unicorns, so i love ur story er poem^_^
hey do u think that u could R&R my story/poems? that would be cool!^_^

Indeed, the beauty of an unicorn is... unique. The description is good and the forest is the perfect enviroment for your magical being. Congratualtions to have taimed your own unicorn!