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| marshbar960 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abusevery interesting poem and very powerful. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
| Handmaiden4Him 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is an amazing poem and it really speaks to the heart of the matter. I know a lot of people can relate to this in many different ways so I'm very glad you have written it. Thanks. Keep up the great work! God bless! |
| Getuie 2004-11-16 ch 1, | abuseThe poem kind of made me think of the song "Damaged" by Plumb. "None of us can be strong always, alone on our own," This line stuck with me... I think it kind of speaks out the truth within the darkness of blaming self... A very striking poem. |
| myno 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abusebeautifully written, thanks for the kind reviews, I will try, really try, to find a way to trust him again. It's so hard... If we weren't so close, if he weren't my brother and we didn't both have to face each other every day, it would be easier, i think, to heal... But that's not how it is, so I just have to keep trying. |
| simpleplan13 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI like it.. very nicely written |
| Anastasia Who 2004-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. It has lots of symbolism in it and good imagery. It is an angsty poem, but also a happy one. Well done |
| brknheartlonely 2004-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really great poem, it really made me think about all the stuff I have been through, I have recently given my life to christ and I was too a victim of Satan's lies and deciet and sometimes I still am but not as often. Your poem really lifted my spirits. Thank you for writing it. |
| c0nquestri0n 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful poem... I can somehow relate to this. God Bless. Keep writing these beautiful poems. |