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| Androssganon 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abusepretty kool. u should work on your grammer, but besides that... good job. it was a little confusing, but what fictionpress story isn't? |
| Made in U.S.A. 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...a bit disturbing but I still enjoyed it. Keep writing :D |
| John Stein PhD 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseNihilism is for people who hate themselves and are hated by others. |
| Bragi 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseDear God, I have finally found myself in the state of mind to review one of your tragic, winding peices of logic. It was awful. I will forget about it in a few minutes, convinced of reality by the sound of my favorite CD and the taste of a microwave burrito. But you have succeeded in giving me a little glimpse of what is really there, even if I do not want to look at it all that long. Thankyou |
| lola-in-slacks 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseHm. Clearly you are actually sick and twisted but I am impressed by your ability to write graphic descriptions of death without flinching. You seem to see worlds that nobody else sees. I, however, am that girl with her eyes shut who has to be taken out of all the Biology dissections and I am feeling ill now. p.s. your writing style is, as ever, v. good. Seriously. |