Reviews for Of Tongue Studs and Pizza

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bansira 2007-03-02 ch 1,	abuseAww... that was so cute
kalmia raphael 2005-06-06 ch 1,	abuseaww poor kay... he's so sweet, being all anxious like that. i want to see more of these two ;-) liked muchly.
Damian E L 2005-05-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseOoh, I like this.
Vyctryx 2005-03-03 ch 1,	abusesniff sniff This is beautiful, I ached for Kay all the way through. You're amazingly talented!
PirateGrrl 2005-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI'm glad it turned out ok. For some reason (probably the mood I'm in) I thought he was going to come back and leave him! Good story; nicely written. :D
Posterior Praiser 2005-01-31 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is a really cool piece. You really get into the head of the chara. Writing first preson is not easy. I know from experience, since I've tried it and got frustrated. You pull it off so well. I feel evey emotion he does. It's really amazing. Great work ^^ goes to read the second story
Gilded Muse 2005-01-24 ch 1,	abuseOh... That would be my "cute" noise. How adorable! Kay was willing to get his tounge pierced for this guy (I'm so deathly afraid of needles that I really admire anyone taking that kind of pain in order to appease their boyfriend. I would chicken out. Screw true love, I'm not getting anywhere near that). I mean, how cute is that? And what the hell are they doing eating pizza, huh? I can think of a much better way they could have spent their "welcome home" time. ^_~ Going to read the Brent one, now, because he seems like a good guy and would have loved Kay even if he hadn't had gone and done soemthing wild like stuck metal through his mouth.
Forever Frost 2005-01-12 ch 1,	abuseAw, the ending was so cute, I was happy that everything ended well for poor Kay. It really made me sad how depressed he was, but I think that's part of your skill as a writer, to evoke such emotions from the reader. Once again, very cute, made me happy :)
XxblinkxX 2005-01-10 ch 1,	abusethis story rockswheeand I mean.... I even stumbled across this on my own, after vowing to read yer stories but...er...not...coughisalazyarsecoughGAH I love it. pompoms
Stefen 2005-01-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome! :-) So cute!
rainbowskye 2004-11-10 ch 1,	abuseSo well written! I think that you've really conveyed the emotion of the piece well, and I'm liking your descriptions ^_^ Very much an enjoyable read
vampiregoddessblood 2004-10-15 ch 1,	abusewierd, but keep writing ...
princess max 2004-10-15 ch 1,	abuseI can never get over the fact that you're fifteen. Honestly, do you even realise how awesome a writer you are?!?! I love how you can use one or two lines to convey so much meaning, or totally twist a story or mood, without it coming across at all cliche or melodramatic. When Brent mentions that tongue studs are hot as hell, I swear my heart fell in tune with Kay's.
Eeyaatoe 2004-10-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt was wonderful. Though I don't understand why the narrator is called Kay if his name is Alexander, but hey, it's your story. I still loved it even with the confusion.
Kimagure (too lazy to sign ... 2004-10-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw! That was so sweet! Poor Kay, my heart was really aching for him, the way he was so worried that he wasn't good enough. I really, really wanted to smack the hell out of Brent, but then you did such a wonderful job of redeeming him there at the end. :3 Awesome writing!

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