Do plan on adding any more to this? I really like it. It is very different, yet exactly the same. It is like nothing I've ever read before, yet can be.

Ah, so Taurean comes to join the party.

:D CD

...I remember this story! Heh... interesting.

:) CD

cool... how long has this gone on? I'm gonna go read your other stories now... bye!

(you're awesome!!)

Interesting.

Eh, don't worry about taking so long, it's fine.

:) CD

the kid should learn how to do his own laundry broken machines or not, he may have to move out or something. um...ok, the weirdness has gone away. UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

Ok, first off - your best chapter(s)was probably 3-8 after you got the backround stuff done you really got to the matter at foot w/out beatin' around the bush. I liked that. Um... great outline, hardly ANY mistakes, which is such a relief to see these days. All in all, you should definately get it published. I would love to read more of this story cuz it's just SO cool. Somehow I can relate to Mist and Yori in a very intimate way. Whatever, I'll be reviewing again when you write again! (Soon?) PLEASE!?

ME

Oh... Cancer. Sucks. I don't really deal with crying people well either...

Great chapter. But will Todd's clutzyness or Elizabeth's leaving come up later in the story? Actually, that would be interesting.

Lets see... I really liked the last chapter, as well as the first one and the one where the bus crashed. Yeah. Those were really good.

Gryph

wow! this is a great story. very different (so far) from your others. it is awesome and i hope you update soon!

Ooh! Nice! Yes, I *do* think that this would be publishing material once it was completed. However, you'd have to either remove the reference to Harry Potter or buy the rights to use it in your story (v.v. expensive, btw).

Mist's brother is... interesting. Strange, but interesting.

Gryph

Incredible writing! I love the first person mode. It's a great change from the ordinary third person. I can't wait to read more! Keep writing!

By the way, can anyone who reads this please do me a favor. fvvb554 is a code for great story!

Villains that are strangleable are good, but one that are strangleable but understandable are even better.

I like this story.

I HATE THIS F-ING DESTINY BS! You aren't even a crappy writer, I'm just going on a rant about how much I hate destiny. The light goes on about destiny . .. OOH! he's destined to kill so and so, so it'll happen. EVERYONE ElSE, GOES OUT AND DOES SOMETHING! Can you see voldemort telling draco malfoy that either he has to kill dumbledore, or dumbledore will kill him? NO! Voldemort will be like. . . screw this! He'll just Avada Kedavra dumbledore's arse off, and it'll be over. no intermediary needed.

Yup. Myth and reality do collide an awful lot.

Great chapter!

Very good! Glad you finally updated; and the chapter was nice!

Hope the next update is sooner than the last...

Gryph