yep we all suffered during that no posting thing. :) interesting poem...

Yeah fictionpress is the suxors lately, especially all month with the no uploading thing and the server overload. M so I'm rambling, don't mind moi.
So yeah! To the poem... a couple of lines are out of place (obviously) so the poem's not very rhythmatic but I like the personal feel to it and the way you described your feelings. Not bad.
Jenna xoxo

there's a cynical wit to this I adore.

Ah maybe I can upload my poems too now. I can't upload them either.
Maaike