That was absolutly beautiful. Very touching. It will go onto my favourites list.

aw such a sad ending.. nice extended metaphor and beautifully written

yet again another amazing poem. Your poems have such depth and meaning. It's one of those poems that once you pass away like 100 yr from now Unviersity lit classes will be picking it apart trying to find all the symbolisim in it, it's just that amazing.
bwahahaha- go u- ur my idol! woot! lol..I'm not hyper.. REALLY-
ok yeah- thought I’d just let you know u’ve written yet another awesomely amazing poem.. ur so my idol :P
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