Nice. Very nice. The longest poems aren't always the best you know.

Some sort of hidden message, yes, somewhere in the words. Between the lines? Under them? *Boogles the mind*

PS: I just happen to be a 16-age-old high school junior with the same first name. Interesting, huh?

~Englishrain

I liked it. Usually, I don't like haikus (mainly cuz i write em and they turn out like crap, but we won't get into that.) I was really good. I liked "Perceptions Cloudless." I dunno why... it just sounds cool.
Thanx for reviewing me!
-Tipped

nice, i like this one better. I can't write haiku's so i'm probably not one to be analyzing/reviewing them

awesomeness

great imagery (:

Wow...that was lovely!
~lara

Nice image. m