 Jezsh 2005-12-19 . chapter 1aren't we all? This is really good for a haiku, I like it very much :) |
 Toph Gonzalez 2005-01-20 . chapter 1Though I have not taken opium (that's illegal isn't it?) I've read and seen experiences of people taking it and it does bring you to a state of surreal ecstacy. And the way you compare it to a woman's lips is just lovely. As you said, "I'm hooked by a kiss." Adds to favorites. |
 Marissa 2004-11-15 . chapter 1 Update your stuff or die.
This is one of my faves from you, btw.
:D |
 makeshift parachute 2004-10-18 . chapter 1eh.. i'm not much on the whole kiss thing but hey, good job anyways. |
 simpleplan13 2004-10-16 . chapter 1nice metaphor |
 Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2004-10-16 . chapter 1that is absolutely positively fantastic, though i don't know what opiate menas. I give this an A* |
 Manuel Fajar 2004-10-15 . chapter 1That's the feeling. m |