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Reviews For: Opium Kisses
Jezsh 2005-12-19 . chapter 1
aren't we all? This is really good for a haiku, I like it very much :)
Toph Gonzalez 2005-01-20 . chapter 1
Though I have not taken opium (that's illegal isn't it?) I've read and seen experiences of people taking it and it does bring you to a state of surreal ecstacy. And the way you compare it to a woman's lips is just lovely. As you said, "I'm hooked by a kiss." Adds to favorites.
Marissa 2004-11-15 . chapter 1
Update your stuff or die.
This is one of my faves from you, btw.
:D
makeshift parachute 2004-10-18 . chapter 1
eh.. i'm not much on the whole kiss thing but hey, good job anyways.
simpleplan13 2004-10-16 . chapter 1
nice metaphor
Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2004-10-16 . chapter 1
that is absolutely positively fantastic, though i don't know what opiate menas. I give this an A*
Manuel Fajar 2004-10-15 . chapter 1
That's the feeling. m
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