Yay! Go 'Lyssa! I love it;)

That was a _very_ nice poem. Some of the words were a little too intelligent for me (LOL! XD -bashes idiot head against a wall-), but I got the over-feel of it, and that's what matters. And those wonderful big words made your poem stand out a lot from all the other poetry that is written. So consider yourself special! -grins bigly- Yesh, yesh, but we already knew you were special, eh? ^.~ In a good way, and you better know that I mean it that way. :P See ya, Miss Bluesummers~! (^.~)

Powerful words. In the hands of a great poet, or in this case poetess, emotions spill onto a page creating worlds beyond what we see.
Wissa-chan, this is wonderful.
'As to my optimism in a paradise lost.
The roses wither away in the dust...'
I like that line. I love the entire feel of the poem. ^_^ See? You are a great writer.

I liked the visuals in the poem. Watch out though... I didn't know what you meant to say sometimes.

hmm, i like the format.
"For all the world has forgotten me,/And left me only jaded tears."
i like those lines the best. this poem did a good job of showing the emptiness and just the overall feeling of being forgotten. good job
-firehair