i have to say as far as poetry goes this was definatley my favourite poem of yours. it meant alot ot me when i needed it most. thanks

Nice poem. Conveys alot of emotion, with just the actions you were talking about taking. It was writen well too. Good job Keith ^_^,-Rae

aww this is beautiful it's got me in tears, I'm a HUGE sucker for love and well this poem has touched me just like all your others-

Ja matta ne-Blood Red Moon

P.S.- Ja matta ne means later in Japanese

Ah, the conventional love poem. The one fault I've always had with such poetry is the "if" nature of it - it sort of stops any depth from appearing because everything is so grand and unattainable. But as love poems go, this one is a very nice one. Though I'm sure I've said all this before...

aww, i love it.
-firehair