aw this is incredibly touching. i hope you dont mind if i read this out at my colleges poety night. all credit will be yours, though. this i can promise you.

lovely, that was really touching!

Quite the lovely poem. Although its filled with little teardrops... jeez, I find it so sad! But beautiful. Nevertheless.

~Anna

Aww, sweet, It was written very nice.

I love this poem! Very sweet. BTW, I love the Ev. song too.

i loved it in away it was sad but very touching, you have great talents.
lots of love
AllyCred

woot! fictionpress finally let me review stuff again.*ahem* Yes, I'm back AGAIN, to express how much I like your poems. This one is no exeption and adds to the list of great poems you have already written, good job ^^.
-Rae