May i say keith that i have always loved this poem and rereading it has brought me back to a time long before. I love the rhyming scheme, always have, and although i know that you have written poetry far better than this, this remains one of my favourite

omg.. this is just great, beautiful, PERFECT!! my writing is nothing next to yours, i mean it!! i can't believe how talented you are, keith.. it makde me cry, god.. i loved it!! you're the best! you and alex... :) love you lots, ~zai~

This is beautiful, just amazing, I can say I related to this is someway. It's very touching and can get out to a lot of people about soulmates and their's.

Beautiful. I remember reading this a while ago...thought I reviewed it...but apparently not. Liked it, and a word that comes to mind is "amazing" and thats exactly what this is, amazing.-Rae

WOW! I absolutely relate to this. This poem is one of those ones where you start reading, read it in awe, end reading, have a warm fuzzy feeling as well as having your intellect stimulated; then you think, "I wish I had wrote that." That's probably one of the best compliments a writer could give another. So, I'm giving it to you :) Splendid work, an understatement. I'm putting this in my favorites. (And thanks for reviewing me.)

you really captured the essence of a soulmate, very powerful, love it

Very sweet. great job with this.

the standard of ryhme in this is excellent, i love the whole flow and because it means so much to you, we can feel the emotion behind it. i especially love the last stanza, that captures your whole relationship, i just loved it.
lots of love
AllyCred.

OMG, wow. you are so good. I love your writting. and you reviewed me! wow, thank you. You write very beautifully and this poem is done very well. I love it.