Beautiful and incredibly painful to read. Every word is perfect.

Very strong and very powerful. I can see how this relates to epilepsy in a very subtle way. Good vocabulary use and a good sense of "mysticity" here.

wow. just wow. this was so perfect. stunning images to go with an amazingly told story. this was just breath-taking and beautiful. i don't even know what else to say...

Beautiful & I love it. I can just picture a white envelope in his hand...Such a clash of just everything, lust & prophets & opium pretty sad eyes...Gah, I ruin it by trying to review it.