I like it, It's a good way to start, and the story line's great! I look forward to reading the rest!

heyI liked this chapter.. the spell to resurect ppl i think id use.. if ti was someone i really really loved.. cos then id rather have them alive than me... anyway. i ahve to go. i have a natinal test in snglish soon.. see ya!!

J

Yay, Paint it Black is back! The story line is as intriguing as ever and of course Danny's letchery never fails to make me laugh. Continue writing this out!

I love this! I think you've got a great plot so far, and I look forward to continue reading!

A little shorter than Legacy? HA! Awesome job...yay for me... I finally reviewed! I have yet to finish Legacy... the bad girl that I am.

Dude... it's also the name of a Vanessa Carlton song. Either that or she just re-did it.

Rik

Looks like a pretty cool way to start.

Really good start. Write more! ^_^

I like that one. It's really good and sad. Somehow I'm really touched and awed by your few words. I bow 2 you mistress Kelsick. Aneways Love Hermoics