-_-. That's so sad. Great descriptions and detail, I really felt the characters pain. Keep writitng

Bunny

Nicely abstract, and a refreshing point of view. It's interesting that you depict him as a saviour: maybe a counter piece with St. Peter "condemning" people to Heaven would be interesting to write. Some good metaphors in there. You reviewed one of my stories ages ago and I'm sorry I took so long getting back. I like this very much, it made me think.