An-Author-At-Heart
2004-10-16
ch 1,  | abuseOoh... I love the metaphor of this, and you wrote it very well. The idea of "melancholy dreams" is very deep, I really like it. Actually the whole song is deep, but the title is the... deepest? Anyway, it was very good. I can't believe this came to you when you got a test back! Now that's quick inspiration (even though it sounds like the test might have gone bad... I don't know). And I know what you mean about the fictionpress formatting - it makes me want to tear out my hair sometimes! |
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