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| Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2007-06-25 ch 1,  | abuseThis is the epitome of "Short but Sweet". I love how you got me so interested in "my"/the main characters emotions, and had my heart falter at the words the secondary character was saying to "me". Such art! I almost wish you'd put a plot to it. This would make a loverly prologue to a story. But, of course, that's your decision. Either way, I'm lovin' it! ~ARS |
| CrashedmyHarley 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusewow... that was deep... short, but deep |
| Captain Lucky 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseYour first reviewer said it all. I found this from their profile. I like it...I'd like to know more, possibly? CL |
| Gypsy Pink 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHard and beautiful. Raw and delicate. "You'll learn how to fly, eventually. No one is going to catch you." I ventured a look over my shoulder. "Not even you?" "Especially not me." Your hands caressed my back lightly again, pausing slightly. Almost without meaning to, I braced myself. "Why?" Push. "Because I love you." I fell. I simply loved those lines. Can I put them on my profile? |