Awesome!

This is the epitome of "Short but Sweet". I love how you got me so interested in "my"/the main characters emotions, and had my heart falter at the words the secondary character was saying to "me".

Such art!

I almost wish you'd put a plot to it. This would make a loverly prologue to a story. But, of course, that's your decision. Either way, I'm lovin' it!


~ARS

wow... that was deep... short, but deep

Your first reviewer said it all. I found this from their profile. I like it...I'd like to know more, possibly?

CL

Hard and beautiful. Raw and delicate.

"You'll learn how to fly, eventually. No one is going to catch you."

I ventured a look over my shoulder. "Not even you?"

"Especially not me." Your hands caressed my back lightly again, pausing slightly. Almost without meaning to, I braced myself.

"Why?"

Push.

"Because I love you."

I fell.

I simply loved those lines. Can I put them on my profile?