Wow Rochelle! Where do I begin?!?!

This write is truly original and beautifully vicious. From the very start I was there sitting in the room feeling the emotions of your characters! They are so strongly developed and complex. I see so many things in this story and can definitely hear your voice in the style of your writing. It is really beautiful and terrifying and realistic in its own way. I love that! You have created a bridge between possibilty and fantasy that I am easily able to cross! I love the deep detailed descriptions you use and that you haven't drowned them in too many words! This is a great write! I hope to read more of your originals!! The take-offs seem to be your comfort zone but there are so many amazing completely new stories just waiting to spill from your heart as well! I hope you continue to explore them! Fantastic job!

Riya

Captin!!
I love this!! I'm not sure how I've missed it, but I am sorry! So unique and yes, it was sensual! You cheeky miss!
Emmy

That was brilliant. The writing was superb, the imagery vivid. I believe this was intended as a one-shot, but if you were to continue it, it could be an amazing full-story. Please do keep writing!

~Mlle. Daae